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This is a poem i just wrote can you tell me if it's good and rate it 1/10 please :) My life's fading away while the government plays there stu-pid game. I wish everything would change instead of staying
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This is a poem i just wrote can you tell me if it's good and rate it 1/10 please :)

My life's fading away while the government plays there stu-pid game. I wish everything would change instead of staying the same. Can someone help me I don't know how long i have before I pass but if you see this i want to make it right before it's my time to say goodbye

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I mean, it's pretty dark but it's actually pretty good. Maybe change the format it's in?

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7/10

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