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Tico Torres has a wide range of experiences as a drummer for both Chuck Berry or Bon Jovi.

What is wrong with the sentence?

It has an incorrect coordinate conjunction.
It lacks parallel structure.
It has excessive coordination.
It has an incorrect pairing of correlative conjunctions.

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it is D. I think it is.

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The wrong part of this sentence is that, it has an incorrect pairing of correlative conjunctions specifically both...and. The correct sentence should be, "Tico Torres has a wide range of experience as a drummer for both Chuck Berry and Bon Jovi."
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