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Can someone please edit or check my grammer on this poem? Pleaseeeee

Dear feet,
Thank you for letting me dance,
for letting me move easily,
for carrying me all day long.
But sorry,
for hurting you during the games,
during running and playing.
But no matter what,
You will always be my best friend to
take me to places.

User Cashew
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your spelling is correct,you need to put commas in the right place.
User MacKentoch
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No Grammar Problems here other than the fact that you spelt Grammar wrong