Question

[1] The Declaration of Independence is beautifully written. [2] Jefferson argues that everyone has the right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. [3] It is a government’s job to protect these rights. [4] When a government fails, Jefferson asserts that the people can overthrow their government. Which sentence should be revised to make this summary more objective? sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4

Answer 1

the answer would be sentence 1! please correct me if i'm wrong. but i dont think i am

Answer 2

The answer is:

sentence 1

As the adjective Beautiful is a subjective thing that is matter of personal opinion of the author of the text, in order to make it more obejective you have to revise it and change what is said.