Question

Read the sentence and answer the following question:

I would like to give you my thoughts on this organic gardening movement.

Which revision would make this sentence more precise?

a. I have doubts that organic gardening alone will reduce the use of pesticides.
b. I have some deep concerns about the movement to increase organic gardening.
c. I like the idea of organic gardening, but sometimes I am not so sure.
d. I would like to share my ideas and thoughts on the latest news on organic gardening.

Answer 1

b. I have some deep concerns about the movement to increase organic

Step-by-step explanation:

The idea of the speaker is to be heard. He or she wants to state something that he or she has in mind about Organic Gardening. To make something precise is to make it accurate. Right to the point. Instead of saying that you want to say something about it, you could just say that you're worried about the matter and after that, say why.

Answer 2

B: I have deep concerns about the movement to increase organic gardening.

Step-by-step explanation:

The speaker is manifesting his desire to share his opinion on the organic gardening movement, after some consideration; and his conclusion is what makes him compeled to express some information. This doesn't mean he only intends to share his views on the latest news on organic gardening, or that he is unsure about it, but that he has a contribution to make.