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At 7:00 p.m., the babysitter arrived at the apartment, no one was home.

What is the best way to rewrite this sentence?
a. At 7:00 p.m. the babysitter arrived at the apartment but no one was home.
b. At 7:00 p.m. the babysitter arrived at the apartment. But no one was home.
c. At 7:00 p.m., the babysitter arrived at the apartment: no one was home.
d. At 7:00 p.m., the babysitter arrived at the apartment; no one was home.

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I think the best answer to the question that is being presented above would be letter A. The sentence 'At 7:00 p.m. the babysitter arrived at the apartment but no one was home.' is the best way to rewrite the sentence given earlier.
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