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Rewrite the sentence and fix the grammar mistakes.

Screams, laughs, and complaints originating from the back seat much to those in front’s dismay added flavor to the otherwise boring migration of cars.

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Screams, laughs, and complaints originating from the back seat added flavor to the otherwise boring migration of cars.

I got rid of much to those in fron's dismay because I thought that the words were unnecessary.
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