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When revising a draft, what should you do if you find details in a paragraph that do not support its topic sentence?

leave the details as they appear and add more details

revise the details to relate to the topic sentence

leave the details as they appear

User Sitaktif
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B.
Revise the details to relate to the topic.
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What? That is easy. It is B. Why would you leave it, which is what A and C basically say.
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