Question

Rewrite the following paragraph, adding conjunctions and prepositions that make the sentences easier to read.

August came. We needed extra money. We sold the old tractor. We sold some roosters. Harvest time came. We worked hard. We couldn’t get all the corn in. First frost came. The corn was harvested. We picked apples. We made cider. Harvest time is hard. We all worked together. That felt good.

Answer 1

August came. We needed extra money so we sold the old tractor and some roosters. When harvest time came, we worked hard. The first frost came and the corn was harvested but we couldn’t get it all in. We picked apples and made cider. Harvest time is hard, but we all worked together and it felt good. 

Answer 2

August came. We needed extra money, so we sold the old tractor and some roosters. When harvest time came, we worked hard with the time that we had, but we couldn’t get all of the corn in. When the first frost came, the corn was harvested. We picked apples to make cider. Although harvest time is hard, but It felt good since we all worked together.