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Im in middle school and my teacher needs me to write an expository essay about why school work is important. Im in 6th grade.

It needs a hook, 3 bodies and a conclusion.
Make a rough draft.

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Hey You!

Alright, I'll do the inroduction and maybe 2 bodies for you:

(If this clashes with your opinion, don't use it).


School plays a very important role in our lives. Believe it or not, today, education is worth a lot more than it used to. Most jobs and careers rely on some kind of degree that determines how educated you are.

If you don't pay attention in class, you may want to start to before time runs out. School work won't wait for you, and if you don't work hard enough, you may not achieve some of your goals. Even athletic Careers these days might require education and years of schooling. So, school work is very important.
Besides helping you get a job, school work will serve you will as you grow up. You'll have knowlege, and knowlege is a good thing. You'll also learn to use time wisely, spend your money wisely, be a good person, collaborate with others, and live a successful life. You may develop long-lasting relationships during your schooling and meet new people as well.

I Hope You Liked It! :)
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