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Help!! How can I make this sentence more direct? “The pictures were a process to come out presentable and wanting to make the viewer want to go eat the food.”
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How can I make this sentence more direct?

“The pictures were a process to come out presentable and wanting to make the viewer want to go eat the food.”

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“The pictures were a work in process but the ending results made the viewer desire food after”
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