Question

Read the following paragraph. Then rewrite it to make it represent good human relations skills.

Answer 1

Bart moved to New Jersey when he was 16 years old. He was unhappy until he befriended a few kids his age. During the winter, he would help his elderly neighbor Mr. Jones, then go back to playing video games. In the Summer, Bart would ask Mr Jones if he could go swimming in his pool.

Answer 2

Answer: Bart was 16 years old when he moved to New Jersey. He was unhappy until he befriended a few kids his age in his new neighborhood. During the winter, he helped his elderly neighbor, Mr. Jones, remove snow from his sidewalk. After that, he would go back to playing video games. In the summer, Bart would ask to go swimming in the Mr. Jone's pool.