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Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?

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In 2011 at Yankee stadium, thirty-seven year old Derek Jeter made his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees.
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