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Write a short story about a girl who fell for her boy best friend because he lead her on and she cant get over him even though he rejected her.

-Be very descriptive
-one long runon sentence
-Include a place
-third person
- no naming the girl boy name can be somthing that starts with a C
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Jacob and Darlene met at the Placerville Farmers market Darlene was drooling over Jack. Darlene went up and introduced herself with a gleaming smile and nervous eyes. Jack and Darlene immediately hit it off smiling and laughing and talking. Little did they know their friendship is just getting started. Over the years Darlene‘s feelings for Jack got stronger and stronger. Darlene believe jack was flirting with her because he was Just being overly nice. And that’s when we all knew she fell for him. One day Darlene finally swallowed her pride and went to talk to jack about her intense feelings for him. This conversation did not go all the way Darlene planned all jack does not have the same feelings that Darlene has for jack. Darlene felt led on and overall defeated. Jack and Darlene still remain friends just not as close as when they were younger. To this day Darlene cannot get jack out of her mind.
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