Question

Pandy and Claire are writing effective conclusions. Paddy’s conclusion will summarize his main point of reaffirm his theses statement. Claires conclusion will take the readers is beyond the scope of her essay. Who is riding in effective conclusion?

Answer 1

Paddy's conclusion will be more effective since it restates and summarizes the main point or thesis, therefore bringing more validation to the essay, while Claire's conclusion is beyond the scope of her essay and won't convince the reader as well as re-introducing the original claim would be.