Question

Read the sentence. I take dance classes after school I want to be a ballerina.

Which revision most effectively corrects the fused sentence?

A. I take dance classes after school, I want to be a ballerina.

B. I want to be a ballerina, therefore I take dance classes after school.

C. I take dance classes after school because I want to be a ballerina.

D. I want to be a ballerina taking dance classes after school.

Would it be B?

Answer 1

The Correct answer is C!!

Answer 2

The revision that most effectively corrects the fused sentence is C. I take dance classes after school because I want to be a ballerina. Because introduces an adverb clause of reason.