Question

Janice is writing about a description of a house. Choose the sentence that includes precise and clear word choices. The tin roof shone in the sun, and the front lawn was green and inviting. It was a square house with a yard in front. I went to the house on a Tuesday morning. The house looked like all the other houses on the street.

Answer 1

The first sentence: the tin roof shone in the sun, and the front lawn was green and inviting is the correct answer. When they tell you that they want a precise and clear word choice, they are looking for the sentence that brings the most vivid image into your mind. The sentence that describes the scene the best.

Instead of: the ball, they want: the blue, rubber ball, which was deflated and lay pathetically on the ground.

I hope this helped you.

Answer 2

I would say The tin roof shone in the sun, and the front lawn was green and inviting.

It's the only one that gives a somewhat detailed description of the house, plus it gives it a positive sound, for example the word "inviting".

Hope this helps, baii <3