Question

Which sentences use description that holds the reader’s interest? Check all that apply. I packed my things and got on the bus. I heard the pop and hiss of eggs in a pan coming from the kitchen. I could tell that my friend was angry with me. It was a cloudy day. As I sped up, the pavement under my feet offered less and less resistance until I felt like I was flying.

Answer 1

The second and last sentences use the most florid language and are thus more interesting to a reader.
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Answer 2

B). I heard the pop and hiss of eggs in a pan coming from the kitchen.

E). As I sped up, the pavement under my feet offered less and less resistance until I felt like I was flying.

Step-by-step explanation:

The chief concern of an author while writing is to behold the readers' interest and keep it intact until the end of the description. They employ words or diction in a manner that helps appeal to the senses of the readers and develop their interest in the narrative.

As per the question, the options B and E employs the description that holds the interest of the readers as it includes the sensory details and descriptions like 'pop', 'hiss', 'sped up', 'pavement under my feet', 'felt', etc. that helps the audience to visualize the representation or description and keep their interest unblemished. Thus, options B and E are the correct answer.