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Which sentence makes the best use of descriptive language?

Malia grabbed her suitcase and purse and headed to the nearby airport.
The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep.
Tara wanted a job so she could save enough money to buy a new bike.
In the morning, it was windy enough to fly the kite Johnny had purchased.

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The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep.

This sentence uses sound "The piercing squeal", Touch "of tires on asphalt", How "startled Katrina", and From what "from a deep sleep."

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the third one i thinkĀ 
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