Question

My favorite place is a quiet, wooded area behind my house. The spot is surrounded by trees and has a wooden bench that my father built. When I go to my favorite spot, I can smell the sweet perfume of nearby pine trees. If it is a quiet day, I can hear chipmunks and squirrels scurrying through the leaves. A soft breeze often blows through the pines and swirls through my hair. When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel very good. Which of these BEST revises the last sentence to provide more descriptive detail?

A) When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel fine.
B) When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel really great.
C) When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel quite pleased.
D) When I'm in my favorite spot, I feel calm and relaxed.

Answer 1

I would say D is the best choice because it describes more of how you feel.

Answer 2

D is the most specific, and fits well into the previous descriptions. I would say it is the correct answer.