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Hello!! I need to tips on my roughly drafted poems.

Hello!! I need to tips on my roughly drafted poems.-example-1
Hello!! I need to tips on my roughly drafted poems.-example-1
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User Tomaski
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Well, your poem is well-written and well-organized that there's no need of having a tip, but the poem needs to be a less depth-full as it will be very hard for others to understand

User Klues
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Wow, that was good. I'd put more rhyming words depending on the poem you want it to be, but all in all great work.

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