Question

Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we celebrate our students and, of course, eat some rockin' breakfast sandwiches. I know you're crazy busy, but if you find an hour to spare this Saturday, we'd all be super excited. Which revision best maintains an academic style throughout?

Answer 1

Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we celebrate our students and eat some delicious food. I know how busy you are, but if you could find the time to attend, everyone would be grateful.

Answer 2

It's C. Senator McKee, I am writing to humbly request your presence at our Harper Middle School Honors Brunch, the annual event where we celebrate our students and eat some delicious food. I know how busy you are, but if you could find the time to attend, everyone would be grateful.