Question

What conceit (extended metaphor) runs throughout the text to describe life in the outcast of poker flat?

Answer 1

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

Answer 2

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.