Question

Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime, but they must be enforced in the home. "My parents don't really make me follow the curfew." Another resident says her "children are in high school now" and so they "don't listen to me anyway."Which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt? A.Use of support B.Coherence C.Grammar D.Word Choice

Answer 1

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Answer 2

B.Coherence

Step-by-step explanation:

The passage is incoherent which implies that the focuses are not logically associated. At a certain point, to start with, we have curfews and their institution in homes, and after that all of a sudden we hop to kids being in secondary school who don't tune in to their parents.