Question

HELP ASAP! I need these 3 to pass & I'm confused on them

1.Which of the following shows the most effective dialogue ?

- John, you are ill; we have to get you to the Good Samaratian Hospital to save you

- John, how I'll you appear! what shall we do ?

- John, you look sick. what's wrong ?

- John, as I'll with the flu you are, driving to Mexico seems highly unreasonable


2.In writing dialogue, try to avoid

-using quote marks
-using dialogue to "show" with specific quotes
-using dialogue to show what characters say
-using both dialogue and narrative to say the same thing


3. One revision technique is to;
- cut out sections that use consistent point of view

- cut out sections that develop characters too fully

- cut out sections that move more slowly than other sections

- cut out sections that do not have anything to do with the story

Answer 1

1 is A, if you are trying to seem a bit more rational with your statement, 2 is D, as doing this would be detrimental to the reading experience, and 3 is D, as having part that have nothing to do with the story takes away from the story that you're trying to read.

I hope this helps, and good luck! remember to check all of your answer before you submit.