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High school students should study a language

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This sentence could be improved by including

-Supporting Evidence
-An Informal Tone
-A Clear Opinion
-Lively Language

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This sentence should be improved by including supporting evidence.
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-Supporting Evidence This is the right option.

The claim is: High school students should study a language . To strengthen this idea evidence is needed. For example, the evidence can include the relationship between studying a language - which may refer to a foreign one- and the positive results this may have in different areas. These can be: improvement in cognitive skills, in general; improvements in mother tongue; and getting more tools to face the labour market.

These options are not right:

-An Informal Tone ( The statement has a presciptive tone not a friendly tone. It sounds like a formal statement not like a conversational exchange).

-A Clear Opinion ( The statement is a generalization , so it needs objective evidende.)

-Lively Language ( The statement does not sound as if it were from a commercial).

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