Question

What is the difference between mature writing and immature writing

Answer 1

Mature writing uses good vocabulary,and immature writing doesn't have good vocabulary or good writing experience.

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Answer 2

Mature writing uses broader vocabulary, while immature writing is very descriptive, and often longer.

Step-by-step explanation:

Mature writing example:

It was obvious that the boy was struggling emotionally.

Immature writing example:

The boy looked very sad, he was crying, and he didn't talk much.

They both get the same point across, but the 1st one sounds way better than the 2nd.