Question

Read the paragraph from "Sixteen" and answer the question.

And that was last Thursday. Tonight is Tuesday. Tonight is Tuesday and my homework is done and I darned some stocking that really didn't need it, and I worked a cross-word puzzle and I listened to the radio and now I'm just sitting. I'm just sitting because I can't think of anything else to do. I can't think of anything, anything but snowflakes and ice skates and a yellow moon and Thursday night. The telephone is sitting on the corner table with its old black face turned to the wall. I don't even jump when it rings any more. My heart still prays but my mind just laughs. Outside the night is still—so still I think I'll go crazy. And so I'm sitting here and I'm not feeling anything. I'm not even sad because all of a sudden I know. I can sit here now and forever and laugh and laugh while the tears run salty in the corners of my mouth. For all of a sudden, I know, I know what the stars knew all the time—he will never , never call—never.

Discuss the author's use of phrases and clauses. Begin by identifying the prepositional phrases and any noun, adjective, and adverbial clauses. How do these phrases and clauses add to or detract from the story being told? Then write at least one sentence evaluating how well the author has varied the sentence structure in the paragraph and the structure's impact on the reader. Your answer should be at least 100 words.

Answer 1

The main point of the story is that infatuation isn't true love. We can all sympathize with the girl in the story who is flattered by the young man's attention. She fell for the charming young man. He takes command of each situation, is closely attentive to her, and talks Now don't get me wrong. I mean, I want you to understand from the beginning that i'm not really so dumb. I know what a girl should do and what she shouldn't. I get around. I read. I listen to the radio. And I have two older sisters. So you see I know what's what. Even if the my sisters were not there I would rely on the wisdom of other, more experienced girls, that are either my friends, or are in the family.

Answer 2

Answer & Explanation:

with its old black face turned to the wall - adj.

when it rings any more - adv.

of a sudden - prep.

while the tears run salty - adv.

in the corners of my mouth - prep.

The clauses add to the story by vividly describing the story in a way that holds the attention of the reader. The author has varied the sentences well in this paragraph. The sentences have different starts and build toward the grand ending.

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