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Rewrite the sentences below using phrases, clauses, and parallel structure to combine the important ideas.

Aina reported Wenli to the school authorities. Aina’s friends reported Wenli to the school authorities. Miao was sent to be reformed in the country. Wenli took over the students’ class.

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Aina and her friends reported Wenli to the school authorities. Miao was sent to be reformed in the country so Wenli took over the students’ class.
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One possibility of a sentence that includes phrases, clauses and parallel structures could be:

Aina and his friends reported Wenli to the school authorities, who took over the students' class after Miao was sent to be reformed in the country.

Another possibility may be:

Aina and his friends reported Wenli to the school authorities. And after Miao was sent to be reformed in the country, Wenli took over the students' class.

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