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Which sentence uses the colon correctly?

Kelly was very excited: about the rock concert her friend won tickets for on the radio. She spent four days trying to put together the perfect outfit. In the end, she settled for something simple: a black tee, ripped jeans, and a headband. In contrast to Kelly: her friend, Maria was dressed rather flamboyantly. She wore shocking pink slacks with a silver tank top. All eyes were on: both the girls that night.

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The correct answer is the description of what she decided to wear. The other sentences should have a comma instead as it is a pause instead of a list.
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Which sentence uses the colon correctly?
In the end, she settled for something simple: a black tee, ripped jeans, and a headband.
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