Question

Which is the best correction of the clause fragment? 

While she was making a pot of soup.



 
A.
Change "While" to "When"


 
B.
Delete the word "While."


 
C.
Change "she" to "Karen"


 
D.
Add a comma after "While."

Answer 1

The word "while" is what makes the sentence a fragment, and substituting it with "when" would not correct it. The correct answer is B. delete "while" so that the sentence is: "She was making a pot of soup."