Question

I need heeelp please

Answer 1

11) Fragment: Needs subject
12) Complete
13) Run-on: Needs grammatical change between Saturday and he
14) Complete
15) Run-on: Needs grammatical change between cafeteria and they
16) Fragment: Needs subject

Corrections:
Jamie went to the YMCA on Friday afternoon.
After school, the students met in the cafeteria. They wanted to plan the school dance.

Every sentence must have at least 1 subject and at least 1 predicate. A fragment will generally be missing one of these, while a run-on will include 2+ without any conjunctions or sentence changes.

Answer 2

The answers are below:

11. Went to the YMCA on Friday afternoon. (F)

12. Maya’s favorite subject is science because she likes doing experiments.(S)

13. Bryson went to the waterpark on Saturday he went to the library on Sunday.(R)

14. Lakesia volunteers at the animal shelter with her aunt. (S)

15. After school, the students met in the cafeteria they wanted to plan the school dance.(R)

16. Forgot the permission slip for the field trip. (F)

Choose one fragment (F) and one run-on (R) to rewrite correctly on the long lines.

11. We went to the YMCA on Friday afternoon.

13. Bryson went to the waterpark on Saturday. He went to the library on Sunday.

(or, Bryson went to the waterpark on Saturday; He went to the library on Sunday.)

(Note that there is a period or a semicolon between ‘Saturday’ and ‘He.’)