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We went down to the blue water’s edge as it lapped lazily against the shore. What change would most improve the word choice in this sentence? “Blue water’s edge” should be replaced with a more descriptive detail. “Lapped lazily” should be replaced with a more descriptive detail. “Went” should be replaced with a more vivid verb. “Shore” should be replaced with a more precise noun.

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I think went should be replaced with a more vivid and descriptive verb
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Answer: I think B. “Lapped lazily” should be replaced with a more descriptive detail. is the answer

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