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EXTRA POINTS Can you please think of a better way to phrase this sentence? Preferably with less commas.

"A black mamba then emerges from a cave, climbs over George's foot, looks him in the eye, and passes him by, leaving him unharmed, which George views as confirmation for his plan."

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When a close encounter with a black mamba left him unharmed, George felt reassured in his plan.
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