Question

Your friend has tried her hand at baking cupcakes for the first time. She's really excited about it and can't wait for you to taste them. When you bite into a cupcake, you realize that it wasn't baked long enough and the center is gooey. Write a short paragraph that illustrates what you would say to help your friend improve her cupcakes. Use constructive criticism.

Answer 1

This cupcake isn't bad considering it's your first attempt at baking. The icing is the best part, thick and creamy. I really like the flavors you used too. The only thing that I would change is the baking time, because the center was a little runny. I think if you leave the cupcakes in the oven a little longer next time, the texture will be better. Baking takes practice.

Answer 2

I love your cupcakes and how excited you are to make them but maybe but them in a little longer next time. The center is gooey but the flavor and decoration is perfect. Even the outside is a golden brown but the center isn't cooked all the way through. This is your first time and you did an amazing job!