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Whats wrong with this sentence?

As the 3:00 bell rang. The students slammed their books shut and bolted from the room.

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There should not be a period after "rang"
User Nathan Kamenar
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Should not have a period after RANG. It should be a comma. Then the THE after RANG would not be capitalized.
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