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Our football coach gathered us together and told us to run laps, and then he made us lift weights, and then he said we had to scrimmage. which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

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Our football coach gathered us together are told us to run laps, lift weights, and scrimmage.
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Our football coach gathered us together. He told us to run laps, lift weights, and then scrimmage.

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