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Can someone proof read this for me

Maria y Jones
Hola Jones, ¿cómo estás?
Jones: ¿Bien y tú?
Maria: Bueno, pero hace frío
Jones: Sí, ¿por qué no sales?
María: Ok, ¿puedes hacerme un favor y escuchar mi música?
Jones: ok ven y ponlo abajo escuchar
Maria: qué tienen que decir
Jones: es muy bueno, ¿puedo tenerlo?
Maria: sí

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As said above, Usted is the formal form of you, which you would use when referring to parents, grandparents, uncles, teachers, and anyone that you would give respect towards. When taking with friends you would use the Tú, which is informal and a more causal (lack of a better word) version.
User Mike Davlantes
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It is supposed to say Bien Y usted? if you sre trying to be formal depending if it is a friend.
also where it says
Jones: ok ven ponlo abajo eschuchar
it is supposed to say ok ven y ponlo abajo para escuchar
besides that it is good.
User Rama Rao
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