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Legendary jazz drummer Joe Morello was vision impaired however, he had a talent for hearing and feeling rhythm. what is wrong with the sentence

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A semicolon should precede the conjunctive adverb.
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Answer:

The sentence can be corrected in the following way:

Legendary jazz drummer Joe Morello was vision impaired. However, he had a talent for hearing and feeling rhythm.

Step-by-step explanation:

A longer pause is necessary after the first idea is expressed, since it is a long one in that particular sentence. The connective "however" usually appears at the beginning of a sentence in order to express contrast.

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