Question

Please correct any sentence fragments and run-on sentences in the following paragraphs.

This summer I will be going to a theme park with my family my best friend will go too. It will be fun. Because I like when I get to go with friends. I’ve never been to this theme park before I heard it is very fun. Someone in my class. Told me that there is a rollercoaster that is the tallest in the whole wide world I can hardly even wait to ride it it will be great.

Last summer we didn’t have a very fun vacation because my mom got sick my dad did too. Awful. No one felt good. Except me. Then I was bored. Because there wasn’t anyone to do anything with. We had planned to go to the beach to collect shells. Shells everywhere. But, I didn’t get to take any home because I was too young to go by myself and everyone else was sick so I went home empty handed and that made me very sad.

Answer 1

This summer I will be going to a theme park with my family and my best friend as well. It will be fun, because I like it when I get to go with friends. I’ve never been to this theme park before, I heard it is very fun. Someone in my class told me that there's a rollercoaster that is the tallest in the whole wide world I can hardly wait to ride it will be spectacular.

Last summer we didn’t have a fun vacation because my mom got sick my dad did too. It was awful. No one was feeling good. Except me. Then I got bored because there wasn’t anyone to do fun activities with me. We had planned to go to the beach to collect shells. Shells everywhere. But, I didn’t get to take any shells home because I was too young to go by myself and everyone else was sick so I went home empty handed and that made me upset.