Question

Read the sentence.

Track is important to Greg he runs several times a week.

Which revision most effectively corrects the fused sentence?


Track is important to Greg, so he runs several times a week.
Track is important to Greg, he runs several times a week.
Track is important to Greg running several times a week.
Track is important to Greg because he runs several times a week.

Answer 1

Track is important to Greg, so he runs several times a week.

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

The best answer for this question would be:

Track is important to Greg, so he runs several times a week.

This sentence is the perfect revision because of the punctuation "colon" that segregates the differences of the sentence. In which the first phrase describes the importance of track for greg and the second part is what he does in order to show his dedication to the sport.