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1. Notice the repeated use of commonly used words in the paragraph below. Use a thesaurus to improve the maturity of the writing by replacing five words in bold. Rewrite the paragraphs. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Last summer I read a book that I really LIKED. It was the first time I have ever LIKED a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a GOOD story, and I would recommend it to anyone who LIKES a GOOD story.

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Last summer I read a book that I really ENJOYED. It was the first time I have ever APPRECIATED a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a GREAT story, and I would recommend it to anyone who RESPECTS a PLEASANT story.
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