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Read the excerpt from Hidden Figures

Restricting the computers from joining the editorial
meetings wasn't a rule: it was a rule of thumb. It was
rooted in practice and widely implemented, but it did
not apply without exception to every situation.
Read Takashi's paraphrase of the excerpt.
Computers were not restricted from joining editorial
meetings because of a rule but because of a rule of
thumb; it was a practice that was widely implemented
but did not apply to every situation.
Which paraphrasing mistake does Takashi make?
O He misrepresents the ideas found in the original
text.
O He includes information that is not found in the
original text
O He includes wording that is too close to the original
text.
O He leaves out important details that are found in the
original text

User Mukesh Arora
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Answer:

The correct answer is C.) He includes wording that is too close to the original text.

Step-by-step explanation:

An important rule when it comes to paraphrasing is summarizing in your own words. Otherwise, it is technically plagiarism if you use the exact same wording from the original text, therefore the answer above is correct. I hope this helps! ^-^

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