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A few of the athletes who were not worried about their weight would sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then. Is it use of passive voice, wordiness, or inconsis…

A few of the athletes who were not worried about their weight would sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then. Is it use of passive voice, wordiness, or inconsis…
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A few of the athletes who were not worried about their weight would sometimes order calorie-laden desserts every now and then. Is it use of passive voice, wordiness, or inconsistent style

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Wordiness

The word "sometimes" eliminates the need for "every now and then," making the sentence wordy.
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Answer: B.

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