Question

he following is an excerpt from an e-mail written by a student and intended for a college professor. There’s no way that it is possible that I’m going to get this stupid homework done. Is there any point in showing up to class? If you don’t help me, I’m going to drop this ridiculous class. Rewrite the paragraph after revising it for tone.

Answer 1

There’s no way that it is possible that I’m going to get this stupid homework done. (Incomplete homework//inability to complete homework)
Is there any point in showing up to class? (Reviewing homework in class)
If you don’t help me, I’m going to drop this ridiculous class.(Requesting help)

I am having some difficulties with the homework assigned, and I have been unable to successfully complete it. I especially have issues with solving sections (whatever you want through whatever you want), and I was wondering if we would be reviewing this in the next class. If not, I would appreciate any guidance you could send my way to help me complete this course.

Answer 2

Unfortunately, have been having problems to understand the assigned homework and, unfortunately, I have been unable to complete it successfully. I wonder whether it is possible for you to review the topics in class again. Besides, I would be very grateful if you could help me or provide me with further instructions on how to execute the task.