Question

Read the sentence from “Initiation.”

And from that time on, initiations didn't bother Millicent at all.

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Answer 1

the change that could be made to revise this sentence is to change and to but.

Answer 2

Millicent's tense posture evaporated, replaced by a genuine smile.


I'd say this is the answer, as it directly describes the characterization in a physical way, as opposed to the other answers, which don't answer in a way that physically describes the character.

Hope this helps!