Question

Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English. It was a fine day. A nice breeze was blowing. Birds were making a noise in the tree. Flowers grew by the grass.

Answer 1

It was a beautiful day, and the wind softly fanned through the air. Birds were chirping noisily from the high tree that stood above the magnificent flowers blooming in the grass.

Answer 2

It was a beautiful day. A smooth breeze was blowing. Birds were chirping in a nearby tree. flowers were blooming in the grass.