Question

Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. What is wrong with it? Claim: The Aztec Empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the Inca Empire. I. Introduction II. Aztec Empire A. Political Developments B. Social Developments C. Cultural Developments III. Inca Empire A. Political Developments B. Social Developments C. Cultural Developments

A. The conclusion is missing. B. The focus is unclear. C. The claim is not specific. D. The structure is not organized.
The last a through d is the options btw

Answer 1

The answer for your problem should be A - there is no conclusion - because although the outline for the essay gives the different supporting points to back up the claim, it is missing the conclusion or synthesis statement.

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