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Guys is this essay good?
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Guys is this essay good?

Guys is this essay good?-example-1
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I personally think you did a great job by adding in all the details. I would just add a bit more facts about how we honor the holiday
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I like your essay. Maybe you can fix a lot of your run on sentences. I noticed I kept having to take breathes where there wasn't a comma or a period.
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