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how does this sound for a thesis statement? "Animals are not being treated the way they are suppose to be, humanely"?

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IT REALLY SOUNDS GOOD MAYBE SOMETHING LIKE THIS PEOPLE NATION WIDE ARE NOT TREATING ANIMALS FAIRLY AND ITS VERY SAD AND BAD I PUT MY OPPINION WITH OUT EVEN SAYING IT.
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That sound good to me.
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